Hey Sam, i really like your theme. The objects you have really show it. However, I think you should make the lighting a little darker to emphasize how bad it was during the times. Cause like you said it's in a bunker. For me the bear is one of the main focus and I like how you have the lollipops point to the bear to direct the focus. And just a little thing, the third star candy is tangeting with the WW2 poster.
oh yeah something else I realized. The lollipop on the bottom for some reason kinda leads my focus out of the composition so maybe you should't have it cropped off :-/ or rearrange it in a different way.
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Hey Sam, i really like your theme. The objects you have really show it. However, I think you should make the lighting a little darker to emphasize how bad it was during the times. Cause like you said it's in a bunker. For me the bear is one of the main focus and I like how you have the lollipops point to the bear to direct the focus. And just a little thing, the third star candy is tangeting with the WW2 poster.
oh yeah something else I realized. The lollipop on the bottom for some reason kinda leads my focus out of the composition so maybe you should't have it cropped off :-/ or rearrange it in a different way.
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